Rollercoaster Ride
It was the first time I went up the tower of terror. Everybody told me that they regretted going on the ride. I sat in the seat - then got a fright when the bar slammed over my head.
When we started to go up the tiny hill I thought that this was rubbish, but when the carts were over it, I could just see the top of the ride.
We went up the massive mountain as slow as a snail or a sloth. We finally got to the point that we started to speed up and everybody screamed as they saw that we were in the air and about to turn over to go back down. All of us were zooming down the rollercoaster like we were in hyperspace.
I felt funny in the tummy and my hair was messier than normal.... when I was on the sickening ride.
My friends were right about regretting it...although, you may only get to go on the ride once, so it was totally worth it!
Keira - Yr 4
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