Sunday, June 21, 2015

Snow! By Kohl Goodfellow

Snow 1
Glimmery like a bell.
Soft like a blanket.
Quiet as a snowman.
White as a shirt.
Floats like a boat.
Cold as icecream.


Snow 2
Glimmery like sparkling duet.
Soft like a spongy mat.
Quiet as cats creeping down the hall.
White as guinea pigs in a white cage.
Floats like a canoe paddling down the river.
Cold as freezing ice.

Kohl Goodfellow

Let Kohl know what you think of his fantastic writing that he did by himself on his braille note!

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow kohl you did so good with your snowflake poem you are a toats star


love and lots of it from your friend EW !!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Wow Kohl!
My Favourite one was "floats like a canoe paddling down the river"
& I love those similes that you have used
TM

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