Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Fabulous Writing!

A letter to Mrs C-B about what I would like to be in the production.

Dear Mrs C-B

I would like to be a movie star at the production. A star I would like to be, yes I would. I can't wait until the production. I want every body to clap at me, then I will be a movie star ha ha ha. You are nice like Mrs Garth. Yes you heard me I would love to be a movie star. I think I would love to be a movie star, yes I do.

From Mason

Dear Mrs C-B

I would love to be a singer in the production. I am good at singing and dancing on stage in front of people. I think I should sing and dance on stage, it will be fun. I think it would might be noisy at the end because they will be clapping.

Molly

A character description about my Gran.

My Gran's hair is as soft as a feather, and it is as white as snow.
Gran's skin is as soft as a chick.
Gran's lips are as red as a cherry, they love kissing.
Gran's eyes are as bright as the sun.
Her arms are as soft as a teddy.
Gran's top is warm and cuddly like a soft puppy.
Gran's pants are as green as the bush.
I love my Gran.

Hannah


A character description about Nanna Simm.

Nanna Simm has wrinkly skin because she is old.
She has soft hair like a feather.
She can't live by herself because she is old.
She might not survive by herself.
She is funny and kind and cool.
I would miss her if she passed away.
That would be sad.
I hope she does not.

Abby

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